Thursday, March 13, 2008

Ostracized by a broken silence

She looked so pale
am i again perplexed?
a sudden gale
Oh my! she's so depressed

I came to greet
but then the mood turned dour
to have a seat
a feeble voice went sour

Is she annoyed?
of me whose wish is talk
now i am coyed
away I'm forced to walk

7 Angelic comments:

Gerald Galindez said...

took two days to title this one.

a girl i have known, seemed to find me an annoyance.

Anonymous said...

lovely have crafted it beautifully & the title too!

Gerald Galindez said...

thanks flyingstars,

i always wanted to make my poems paint a picture of lush emotions.

i make my poems my daily diary.

Noah The Great said...

I know how that goes.

It's good, though sad, yet beautiful.

Gerald Galindez said...

thanks Noah,
its really easy to write poems when you're sad.

ekhosama said...

I hate those kinds of situations. One of ur friends doesn't want to talk to u and u don't know why...

Gerald Galindez said...

yes i agree, ~_^