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Friday, March 7, 2008

Give drink to the thirsty

Once a shadowed ground
raindrops fell; a trickling sound
a leaf it has found

Millions come around
as the great Sun is uncrowned
bring joy to the frowned

8 Angelic comments:

Noah The Great said...

Good write!

Gerald Galindez said...

I'm trying to create a picture of hope

things that can be synonymous to hope.

"Hope for all"

Gerald Galindez said...

thanks noah, BTW


your poem "UNFILED"
is my favorite.......

ekhosama said...

As I went on the net all safe and sound...

What a great poem I have found.

I like it. And I like how the title complements the last line.

d SINNER!!! said...

:) Thats Beautiful...

Gerald Galindez said...

thanks for the comments guys.

im quite busy right now.
the finals of our semester and all.

ekhosama said...

Hey Gerald, since u like satyrical poetry, read my poem "horrible blood red wine". It's a satire for drunk driving. I think u'll like it.

ekhosama said...

Hey Gerald, since u like satyrical poetry, read my poem "horrible blood red wine". It's a satire for drunk driving. I think u'll like it.