Gays and rebels are the same
They want something hard to claim
Rebels want the lands even
Gays they want to sip semen
Gays and rebels talk silly
They act and dress more freely
Rebels steal and burn houses
Gays predate and wear blouses
Gays and rebels share a goal
Fire in the hole! Anus hole!
They keep bragging off their deeds
And liking it when it bleeds
Gays and rebels terrorize
The norm of us civilized
Gays they seek for penile fun
And the rebels cheer is gun
As these gays flock the suburbs
Rebels also in numbers
March the line of peace for war
Gays they do it in the bar
Oh! and let us not forget
Both these perverts have their set
Of leaders whose intellect
Coincide their dull defect
Fluent use of odd discourse
These gays' way to intercourse
Rebels make and use their codes
Then later a bomb explodes
They compliment each other
As innocence they shatter
Their hearts, something lunged inside
Is where a thrombus reside
If you see this as insult
Try to see first the tumult
They caused our society
Adds to my anxiety
Due to their perversity
Both made good analogy
Their genus flourished since then
Will God castigate these men?
Friday, August 22, 2008
An Analogy
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18 Angelic comments:
right... very literal
a just analogy..
i hope you gained something new with this poem.
take care readers...
As always, this moves and keeps moving in the reader's heart and mind.
Thanks kath n_n
you'll always be my writing inspiration..
i get used to your point of views..
its fun to read...
both of them are abominations...
very good to relate rebels and gays...
nice. yet..
i dont feel and think the same way though. :D
nice one, but if i have to chew it literally, i think youre stereotyping. your views toward gays are somewhat in-the-box. nonetheless, this is a good poem. ;) kudos.
@prosetitute
You've got no idea how gays affect my life..
Thnks n_n
@ florence...
its okay florence, we have our own discrepancies, in this case, its personal...
thanks form the comment.
@ ben
yeah! i try to have this analogy of rebels and gays...
i succeeded..
darn it, sorry gerald I read ur post about the war in the phillipines. That's horrible. I guess there's war everywhere these days. its sad that i don't hear much about it in the US
I agee with u on gays. They get more rights than Arabs do in our country.
@gerald
it was personal. though it was a harsh analogy, i can now understand why are you so effing hard on gays.
anyway, the world isnt black and white.
@ prosetitute
These predators (gays) never touched me or anything, but i can assure them, if they do,,, it would be there last.
here in our society,, gays are becoming a majority., really.
and i hate their transvestite attitudes... and their flirting.
These predators (gays) never touched me or anything, but i can assure them, if they do,,, it would be there last.
constant vigilance ;)
here in our society,, gays are becoming a majority., really.
and i hate their transvestite attitudes... and their flirting.
yes, gays are everywhere. they're multiplying exponentially. oh, the transvestite. gays are like... ice creams, they come in different flavors. and a transvestite is just one of the flavors. ;)
you might as well try them all, but that would take time. stereotyping is a crime, and btw, my world is black and white and green. ;)
@Prosetitute
"I’ll publish, right or wrong:
Fools are my theme, let satire be my song."
this is satire friend.
yes. forgive me for forgetting. lol
its okay...
there are many people out there.
who forgets.
and let their ego flow in...
Thanks for the comments...
thanks for the comment on my Porn thing..haha! i liked the way yo did the analogy..the thoughts are forceful..and sometimes disturbing..
good one..
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