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Friday, August 22, 2008

An Analogy

Gays and rebels are the same
They want something hard to claim
Rebels want the lands even
Gays they want to sip semen

Gays and rebels talk silly
They act and dress more freely
Rebels steal and burn houses
Gays predate and wear blouses

Gays and rebels share a goal
Fire in the hole! Anus hole!
They keep bragging off their deeds
And liking it when it bleeds

Gays and rebels terrorize
The norm of us civilized
Gays they seek for penile fun
And the rebels cheer is gun

As these gays flock the suburbs
Rebels also in numbers
March the line of peace for war
Gays they do it in the bar

Oh! and let us not forget
Both these perverts have their set
Of leaders whose intellect
Coincide their dull defect

Fluent use of odd discourse
These gays' way to intercourse
Rebels make and use their codes
Then later a bomb explodes

They compliment each other
As innocence they shatter
Their hearts, something lunged inside
Is where a thrombus reside

If you see this as insult
Try to see first the tumult
They caused our society
Adds to my anxiety

Due to their perversity
Both made good analogy
Their genus flourished since then
Will God castigate these men?

19 Angelic comments:

Gerald Galindez said...

right... very literal
a just analogy..
i hope you gained something new with this poem.
take care readers...

kathleenmaher said...

As always, this moves and keeps moving in the reader's heart and mind.

Gerald Galindez said...

Thanks kath n_n
you'll always be my writing inspiration..

i get used to your point of views..

Xegben said...

its fun to read...
both of them are abominations...
very good to relate rebels and gays...

- - - florence said...

nice. yet..
i dont feel and think the same way though. :D

PROSETITUTE said...

nice one, but if i have to chew it literally, i think youre stereotyping. your views toward gays are somewhat in-the-box. nonetheless, this is a good poem. ;) kudos.

Gerald Galindez said...

@prosetitute

You've got no idea how gays affect my life..

Thnks n_n

Gerald Galindez said...

@ florence...

its okay florence, we have our own discrepancies, in this case, its personal...

thanks form the comment.

Gerald Galindez said...

@ ben

yeah! i try to have this analogy of rebels and gays...
i succeeded..

ekhosama said...

darn it, sorry gerald I read ur post about the war in the phillipines. That's horrible. I guess there's war everywhere these days. its sad that i don't hear much about it in the US

ekhosama said...

I agee with u on gays. They get more rights than Arabs do in our country.

PROSETITUTE said...

@gerald

it was personal. though it was a harsh analogy, i can now understand why are you so effing hard on gays.

anyway, the world isnt black and white.

Gerald Galindez said...

@ prosetitute

These predators (gays) never touched me or anything, but i can assure them, if they do,,, it would be there last.

here in our society,, gays are becoming a majority., really.
and i hate their transvestite attitudes... and their flirting.

PROSETITUTE said...

These predators (gays) never touched me or anything, but i can assure them, if they do,,, it would be there last.

constant vigilance ;)

here in our society,, gays are becoming a majority., really.
and i hate their transvestite attitudes... and their flirting.


yes, gays are everywhere. they're multiplying exponentially. oh, the transvestite. gays are like... ice creams, they come in different flavors. and a transvestite is just one of the flavors. ;)

you might as well try them all, but that would take time. stereotyping is a crime, and btw, my world is black and white and green. ;)

Gerald Galindez said...

@Prosetitute

"I’ll publish, right or wrong:
Fools are my theme, let satire be my song."

this is satire friend.

PROSETITUTE said...

yes. forgive me for forgetting. lol

Gerald Galindez said...

its okay...
there are many people out there.
who forgets.
and let their ego flow in...

Thanks for the comments...

pugadmaya said...

thanks for the comment on my Porn thing..haha! i liked the way yo did the analogy..the thoughts are forceful..and sometimes disturbing..
good one..

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