She looked so pale
am i again perplexed?
a sudden gale
Oh my! she's so depressed
I came to greet
but then the mood turned dour
to have a seat
a feeble voice went sour
Is she annoyed?
of me whose wish is talk
now i am coyed
away I'm forced to walk
Thursday, March 13, 2008
Ostracized by a broken silence
written by CANDLELIZARDEGG at 11:44 AM
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7 Angelic comments:
took two days to title this one.
a girl i have known, seemed to find me an annoyance.
lovely words...you have crafted it beautifully & the title too!
thanks flyingstars,
i always wanted to make my poems paint a picture of lush emotions.
i make my poems my daily diary.
I know how that goes.
It's good, though sad, yet beautiful.
thanks Noah,
its really easy to write poems when you're sad.
I hate those kinds of situations. One of ur friends doesn't want to talk to u and u don't know why...
yes i agree, ~_^
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